Everyone has fears, assets and obstacles. We can use it to hold us down or we can use it to motivate and push us forward. These type of things effect you, the type of person you are/ will become. It is here for a reason it makes or breaks the person. For me I take anything just let it process and make a better situation out of it if its possible.
My fear is letting my love ones down. My family , little sister , mother and girlfriend . They all look up to me to get things done. They want to make sure I keep them happy, safe and provide them with whatever they might need. My asset is that I never let anything hold me back. If something gets hard for me I try my best to fight back and look past it. My other fear is failing something I've worked so hard and long on. I cant stand when I spend a lot of my time and effort to make good out of something and it all goes to waste when someone makes one little mistake. I talk to different people and do different activates to keep my mood good and achieving.
I like to go on walks , have talks with my girlfriend about anything that may be wrong because it can get a lot off my mind and make things more positive feeling. I like to think to myself a lot as well after i'm done listening to what others have to say about my thinking's. I feel I can help myself the most with constructive criticism. Everyone has their own problem and ways of dealing with them. They finally have assets and obstacles to add with that as well.
overcoming fear
I have only important things to fear
I'm looking in a mirror
I see me
with a bunch of problems
possibly
but no one can stop
what is meant to be
only make it
somewhat better
unfortunately
let me just say this
I am not to be tampered with
because even this
will not stop the
motive
and im gonna go
get it
Genaro,
ReplyDeleteGood post. I think this is a good first draft that needs some revisions. Firstly, it's a bit short. I'd like to see you double your output in the next post.
You scratch the surface with your fears - fears of letting people down. But let's dig deeper, too. Why do you fear letting them down? Do you think they'll leave? Do they put pressure on you to perform? Why is there so much responsibility on you to take care of them? These are probing questions that will help you get to the heart of the matter.
I think that your fear of letting them down is very real and very honest. But I also think that there are further concerns that create that larger fear. See if you can dig.
Your poem is good, but it seems rushed and too short. Try to double its length with more insight and more struggle/battle. A battle that you can't lose.
Thank you for including the pictures this round. The design is great - it looks much better and more professional.
GR: 80