These image all relate to me because these things express the type of person i am and who i want to become. Growing up i was always around my family. Family is everything for me, no matter what you do or say you can always go back to your family. When i grow up i want to be a family man, working as a police officer. I want to give my family everything mines couldn't. I want to be able to put a stop to all the crime that goes on in my community.
vision poem
we all have a future
but who knows where it will
take us
but we know that it will
make us
who we are
and we will go far
not because it is what we want to do
but what we are meant to do
seek for happiness
until you know you cant look any longer
for the fact that it was always there
but it takes a life of feeling
seeing and knowing
where you yourself are going
because no one has more control
power and motivation other than
yourself
to the extent you would like
to make it
Genaro,
ReplyDeleteGood post. I like the images that you chose - you're setting a good intention for the future. I didn't realize that you wanted to get into law enforcement. Are you majoring in criminal justice?
One of you images has an error and it does not display. Please be sure to review and switch it out if you notice this in your final product.
Also, I'd like to see your paragraph extended with more detail. There is a picture of a movie. I'd like to see how that's part of your future dreams. Some pictures, I'm not too clear on how they apply to your vision. Write more. Don't rush.
Your poem is swift and quick, but I like the theme that you chose and the lines that you wrote. Also, it has a simple, yet straight rhyme scheme that holds the whole thing together nicely. Good work on it. I like the strength of your tone and the ideas that happiness is going to be a life-long journey of seeking.
Good work. Try to put in a little more time and double check your post to make sure that all images are published correctly - and that your design is tight.
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