Everyone has a mission they want to reach and complete in their life. I always wanted to be in the marine corps. To be a marine you need to be very intelligent and physically ready to handle anything. Ever since a young boy I always tried to play as many sport activities as I possibly could. I never felt like anything was good enough. I just kept pushing myself a hard as I could dedicated to what I wanted to reach in my future.
People are going to remember me as a strong, honorable man. After I graduated from high school people would always say that I would be there to help anyone who ever needed assistance, I was very nice but firm. I went to the military and while I was there I also had the opportunity to enroll in college at their expense. I never thought that this type of opportunity could ever happen. After I was done with my contract I wanted to extend my duty to my country. I opened my own military school for people of all ages. I opened one of the biggest boot camps in the U.S. and the graduates have always been the best at what they did.
You always have to try your hardest in anything you do in life. Everything you do has to lead somewhere, has to have meaning. If no one ever tried their hardest in anything nothing would ever get done. Just remember everything is for a reason no one can tell you what your limit is. Put your mind to where your heart wants to go and chase it don't let anything get in the way and you will succeed.
Poem
I going to get it until its done
not matter if its hard or fun
until the sun
rises im going to fight
give it all my might
even if i fall to the ground
i will make the sound
of a proud man
with a high hand
in the sky
saying im the guy
that will go until no more
can be reach
i will preach
no giving up
no matter what
Genaro,
ReplyDeleteGood post. Again, I'd like to see it expanded, though, so that you simply write more and express more. Explain more.
This post has many good highlights and insights. I like your military angle. Did you already serve in the military? That was confusing, considering the tense that you wrote in. Or, is that something that you want to be remembered for? Are you planning on joining the military?
This post is good, in that you are honest throughout. Even your poem seems very honest. But it seems like you stray away from the instructions slightly. Your poem, for example, should be an epitaph. But it sounds like a poem. Then, towards the end, it starts to take the shape of an epitaph.
Therefore, try to remain focused throughout the writing process, so that you do not lose your pulse on the instructions or key topic at hand. Try to to stray as you strain to craft your writing. Stay focused. Write more within that focus.
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